Chapter 1 of ‘Devil down’

‘Devil down’ is a story I have written about a devil who has invited a random 13 year old girl on the streets to live in her Mansion. The girl decides she wants to find out exactly what is going on and more dark secrets will be discovered. Here is chapter 1 of ‘Devil down’

As I stood fearfully in the doorway my eyes greeted me with a great tall figure, so perfect, like a silhouette. A long black cloak marinated in black leaves glowing in the moonlight hiding this great humanness figure. Out of the cloak two hands were born from darkness lowly rising to the top of the figures faint image. The hands were nor white as snow nor ordinary like me. They were a sort of glowing red colour even in the light the shone like stars, dark stars. The nails were long and sharp like knives growing from the fingers. I didn’t touch the figure, I would never dare but the skin seemed as soft as silk and warm as flames. I don’t know how I couldn’t reach out and touch such perfection, such beauty. The hands grasped firmly at the hood and revealed what my eyes could not unsee. A tall dark hooded figure transformed into a tall beautiful woman. Her skin was pure and her hair was fair. Her eyes gleamed like the only stars in the sky. Her skin glowed a gorgeous red colour like the flames of love and not a spot nor wrinkle or even a crinkle was ever to be found. Her lips were luscious and red and more vibrant than her skin and they were perfectly soft. The more I stared into her gorgeous eyes the more I felt a painful urge to kiss this woman and make her my true love. The dress she wore was long and luscious, soft as her skin and the jewels shined like her eyes and her skin. It was dark as the night sky with gleaming red jewels shining into my eyes and blinding me, as was her beauty. She edged closer to me and as she did I did the same until she was practically above me and looking down on me like she was a god and I was a commoner. She breathed long breaths and inhaled deep into her lungs and every breath she took whole winds of rank blew in my fa like a storm. The smell of her breath was like fiery flames burning a thousand rotting corpses at once. Her teeth were not like her body they were black and red like blood. Rotting pieces reeked her mouth like bombs under the earth. As this horror met my eyes I slowly backed away as I held my breath and from the look I was given she knew what had happened, I tried to contain it but it was too much to bare. She turned away and as she did I felt like a curse had been lifted over me and as she did the moonlight dimmed. Before she entered the vast castle she turned and gave me a look. I edged towards her and as I did she entered the castle. I felt I had two options go in or run. I entered.

Fact of the day: In Back to the Future, the time machine was originally an old fridge.

Joke of the day: What do you call a Mexican whose vehicle has been stolen? Carlos

Riddle of the day:

  • In a one-story pink house, there was a pink person, a pink cat, a pink fish, a pink computer, a pink chair, a pink table, a pink telephone, a pink shower” everything was pink! What colour were the stairs?

If you know the answer to the riddle leave it in the comments below. Drop a like If you enjoyed reading this post and want me to keep sharing more chapters. Remember to tell me in the comments if you liked the joke I put up today.

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